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	<title>Comments on: New Short Story</title>
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	<description>The continued life of an aspiring writer.</description>
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		<title>By: Sebastian</title>
		<link>http://ericshonkwiler.com/2010/06/new-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-966</link>
		<dc:creator>Sebastian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Jun 2010 19:27:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gonna go read the rust noir now!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gonna go read the rust noir now!</p>
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		<title>By: Hannah Miet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hannah Miet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jun 2010 20:40:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Noir always kind of turns me on. 

Western themes always kind of turn me on.

Good writing always kind of turns me on.

A lot of the sensual descriptions are timed just right. Legs. Cracked eggs. Nauseous from hunger. Hips jutting.

&quot;She stared me straight on, serious as cancer, and said ,&#039;me too,&#039; before going down on me.&quot;: Brilliance.

I was angry at you for the sex scenes at first. They were such a tease, until the house christening scene.

But that fucking made up for it.

A person can be as ugly as they are pretty, in moments. I think it&#039;s a fact.

I liked the line about her rotten teeth: &quot;things I&#039;d never seen before.&quot;

Seriously dark, and well done.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Noir always kind of turns me on. </p>
<p>Western themes always kind of turn me on.</p>
<p>Good writing always kind of turns me on.</p>
<p>A lot of the sensual descriptions are timed just right. Legs. Cracked eggs. Nauseous from hunger. Hips jutting.</p>
<p>&#8220;She stared me straight on, serious as cancer, and said ,&#8217;me too,&#8217; before going down on me.&#8221;: Brilliance.</p>
<p>I was angry at you for the sex scenes at first. They were such a tease, until the house christening scene.</p>
<p>But that fucking made up for it.</p>
<p>A person can be as ugly as they are pretty, in moments. I think it&#8217;s a fact.</p>
<p>I liked the line about her rotten teeth: &#8220;things I&#8217;d never seen before.&#8221;</p>
<p>Seriously dark, and well done.</p>
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		<title>By: clowncar</title>
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		<dc:creator>clowncar</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jun 2010 20:04:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice, nice, nice.  Love the deadpan objectivity of the voice (that world behind a pane of glass thing again).  And all the fire imagery.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice, nice, nice.  Love the deadpan objectivity of the voice (that world behind a pane of glass thing again).  And all the fire imagery.</p>
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		<title>By: Kristan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kristan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jun 2010 15:11:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congrats!!</description>
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