Comments on: Cowboy’s First Little Vlog

By: Kristan

Kristan — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 19:04:28 +0000

I have to admit I don’t like when workshop warps my things away from me… but for what it’s worth, the part that resonated for me was the narrator’s emotional response to his surroundings, not the morality piece.

By: nicopolitan

nicopolitan — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 08:05:33 +0000

I spent some time away from the blogosphere, and I nearly missed this.

Glad I caught it. I think I know this feeling. It’s a bleakness that agitates all of the wiring. Does that make sense? Is there a word for that? I guess not. I suppose that’s why a poem works.

By: Lindsay

Lindsay — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 00:10:08 +0000

This is a reworked version of the poem you read me ages ago, yeah? Maybe I’m a Shonkwiler purist but I think I liked the original tone better… but then, we all know how I feel about morality. Don’t we? Do I?

I had to say something other than damn, I miss your voice.

By: Aurora

Aurora — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 11:04:10 +0000

beautiful.

By: clowncar

clowncar — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 19:43:30 +0000

I liked the out-of-synch-i-ness. It fit. Nice.

By: Antagonist

Antagonist — Wed, 03 Feb 2010 03:07:09 +0000

Well, that was highly awkward to watch in bed.

By: Eric Shonkwiler

Eric Shonkwiler — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 19:17:00 +0000

Kristan: The original piece is a lot more directed toward a feeling of unknowing. Workshop has turned it into a piece about morality. I’m not so sure that’s where my intent was, but oh well.

Hannah: Pour it into a glass and drink it. Neat.

Seb: I’m not just another smartass. I’m decent to look at, too.

It was luck that I had to get a new laptop that came with a webcam. If it weren’t for that, you wouldn’t even have video.

By: Sebastian

Sebastian — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 17:29:43 +0000

Oooh, no one’s said you’re cute-lookin’ yet!

You’re a delicious little disheroo, Eric.

But we needs to get you a proper microphone (or just a microphone away from the noise source — laptop?) so that I can fully enjoy your deep timbre.

By: Hannah Miet

Hannah Miet — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 16:35:48 +0000

Also, what a strong moment.

I can see it in sepia, and color it vivid with silence.

By: Hannah Miet

Hannah Miet — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 16:32:55 +0000

I realize I’ve ordered nothing.

I could eat the edge of your voice with a spoon.

Or slice it with a knife.

Or with static.

I don’t know. This was worth the bated breath.

You have a voice for a microphone.